Political speeches are a rich vein for Victorian English classrooms because they are short, high-stakes and openly designed to move an audience. That makes rhetoric visible — which is a gift when your Year 9 or Year 10 room holds a wide spread of readers. The task, though, is to let every student analyse persuasion at a level that stretches them. This piece sets out concrete tiering for support, core and extension learners, with scaffolds and challenge tasks, all mapped to the Victorian Curriculum F–10 and pointing towards the analytical demands of VCE English.
One speech, three levels of demand
Choose a single accessible speech the whole class studies together — a well-known Australian address works well because the context is familiar. Then vary the analytical demand rather than the text. Support students identify and label three techniques from a provided list. Core students explain how each technique positions the audience. Extension students evaluate which technique carries the most persuasive weight and why, considering the specific Victorian audience and moment. The layered activities in Analysing Political Speeches – Rhetoric and Stylistic Devices make this straightforward, since the rhetorical devices are already sequenced from recognition through to evaluation.
Scaffolds for students who need support
Support does not mean a diluted task; it means the same analytical thinking with more structure. Under the Victorian Curriculum, you are still targeting the Levels 7–10 standard of analysing how language persuades — you are simply building a ramp to it.
- Provide a technique glossary with one example each of ethos, pathos, logos, repetition and inclusive language.
- Give a colour-coded transcript so students highlight rather than hunt from a blank page.
- Offer a sentence frame: "The speaker uses ___ to make the audience feel ___ because ___."
- Rehearse one analytical sentence orally in pairs before any writing begins.
Core work: from labelling to effect
The move that matters at core level is shifting from spotting a device to explaining its effect on a real audience. Ask students to track how a speaker builds and then releases emotional pressure across a speech, and to argue what the speaker wanted listeners to do next. This is the analytical spine of VCE English's argument analysis, so making the connection explicit helps Victorian students see why the skill matters beyond the current unit. Encourage precise verbs — the speaker reassures, warns, galvanises — rather than the catch-all "shows".
Challenge tasks for extension learners
Extension students thrive on comparison and synthesis. Set them to compare the rhetoric of two speeches on the same issue and evaluate which is more effective and for whom. For a genuine stretch, ask them to consider how the persuasive techniques of political oratory echo the manipulation of language in dystopian fiction — the propaganda machinery explored in Dystopia – Orwell's 1984 and Beyond gives them a powerful lens for critiquing real-world spin. Others might analyse how a dramatic monologue persuades, drawing on the close-reading approach in Shakespeare – Analysing a Drama (Macbeth), where a character bends an on-stage audience to their will. Both tasks push analysis into evaluation, which is exactly where high-achieving VCE responses live.
Assessing across the range
Design one assessment with tiered success criteria so you report against a common Victorian Curriculum standard while honouring different starting points. A single task — "Analyse how the speaker persuades their audience" — can be marked on the same rubric whether a student submits a scaffolded single paragraph or a comparative essay. Choose speeches that matter to Victorian students, including First Nations leaders speaking in their own voice, so the cross-curriculum priority of Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Histories and Cultures is honoured through authentic oratory rather than as an add-on, and students analyse persuasion that is grounded in real community and Country.


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