Say “we're writing an argumentative essay today” and watch the energy drain from the room. Yet argument is the most natural thing teenagers do – the trick is to open the topic with enough provocation that pupils are desperate to write before they realise that is what they are doing. Within Curriculum for Excellence, persuasive and discursive writing runs right through the Broad General Education and into the folio and exam demands of National 5 and Higher. Here are five hooks that light the fuse.
1. Open with an outrageous statement
Put a deliberately provocative claim on the board – “Homework should be banned in every Scottish school” – and ask pupils to move to one side of the room for agree, the other for disagree. The physical commitment forces a position. Then ask three pupils on each side to defend their spot. You have generated arguments, counter-arguments and rebuttals in four minutes, ready to be shaped with Writing a Comment and Argumentative Essay.
2. Use a real-world story
Abstract topics leave pupils cold; a human story does not. Tell them about a genuine local controversy – a proposed mobile-phone ban, a £5 charge for school clubs, a plan to shorten the summer holiday. Real stakes, especially ones measured in pounds and pence that affect pupils directly, make the “so what?” obvious and give the essay a purpose beyond the mark.
3. Borrow the rhetorician's toolkit
Play thirty seconds of a famous, fiery speech and ask: what makes this persuasive? Pupils will point to repetition, rhetorical questions and the rule of three without knowing the terms. Naming those devices – then hunting for more in Analysing Political Speeches – Rhetoric and Stylistic Devices – shows pupils that argument is a craft with tools they can steal.
4. Stage a courtroom
Nothing dramatises argument like a trial. Put a literary character in the dock – Macbeth is perfect, and pairs neatly with Shakespeare – Analysing a Drama (Macbeth). Is Macbeth guilty of murder, or a victim of manipulation? Prosecution and defence must marshal evidence, anticipate the other side, and persuade a jury. That is the exact architecture of a discursive essay, disguised as theatre.
5. Start from a “would you rather?”
Low-stakes dilemmas warm up reluctant writers. Try a quick round before the serious topic arrives:
- Would you rather have free bus travel or free school lunches?
- Should social media have a minimum age of 16?
- Is it better to be feared or loved as a leader?
- Should Scotland's schools scrap exams in favour of continuous assessment?
Each demands a reason, then a “but some might say”, then a comeback – the beating heart of argument.
Turning the spark into structure
A hook only earns its place if it feeds the writing. Once pupils are fired up, capture the heat quickly: three minutes of freewriting on their position before you introduce paragraph structure. In the Broad General Education this builds the discursive muscle that National 5 and Higher folios later reward, and it teaches pupils that a strong essay begins not with a topic sentence but with something worth arguing about. Keep a running “provocations” list on your wall and let pupils add to it – ownership of the question is half the engagement.


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